||[Sep. 7th, 2006|01:51 am]
Doctor Who Concrit
Next installment. I'm carefully taking notes of the crit and will try to incorporate it into each new ep I write. But I will wait until I've finished the story, then go through and do a massive rewrite to cover everything I've already written.
In the meantime, here is the next installment for those interested.
I'm up to about part 7 I think and I'm still debating the last part. Its gotten pretty explicit and I'm not sure if I want/need to continue this heavily. That being said I'm probably 2/3rds of the way through. Part II is fairly safe, still just mild BDSM and drug use.
Here is Part II of the Red Chair.