|Looking for feedback
||[Sep. 6th, 2006|02:49 am]
Doctor Who Concrit
Im looking for feedback to some fic I'm writing...well some NineSmut I'm writing anyway.
Basic premise is an alternate beginning to BadWolf.
What if the Doctor hadn't dropped into a nasty version of BigBrother, but had in fact dropped into a X-rated game show of some kind. After all, with all those reality shows ending in a brutal death, whats stopping them from having the same kind for Adults only. :P
Pretty thin I know, but I'm walking a fine line between kink, BDSM, mild torture and trying not drift into outright rape.
I need feedback, but also feel free to advise me if no one feels comfortable criting this.
Feedback being 'Its great' or 'Its sucks' or 'Ewww!!!' while appreciated for your honesty isn't quite what I'm looking for.
I need crit, does the story hang together, is the premise too farfetched, do the characters work. Do I have Nines mannerisms down...inasmuch as their allowed to show. ect..
Title: Red Chair
Fandom: Doctor Who
Rating: M 18+
Summary: Nine in the Red Chair
Spoilers: Bad Wolf
Contains: Heavy sexual references, drug use, torture, mild BDSM, and other generally adult themes. :P
Disclaimer: The Dr and all belong to the BBC. I'm just borrowing them.
Nine in the Red Chair.